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2013年专升本公共课英语提纲式作文写作思路

2013年02月17日 来源:未知 作者:张小本 编辑:张老师 投稿

提纲式作文是甘肃专升本公共课英语作文考试中最常见的一种作文题型。提纲作文的命题形式是先给出英文作文标题,再用英语或汉语列出提纲(outline),要求考生按照提纲的要求写出文章。提纲有时是短语,有时是句子。提纲作文已经以提纲的形式对整篇文章的范围、内容、段落结构等进行了限定,考生只要按照提纲思路来扩展、充实内容,一般不会偏题,从这个意义来讲,提纲作文属于、较易完成的专转本作文类型。

①中文提纲作文

Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Surfing on the Internet according to the following outline(given in Chinese).Your composition should be no less than 120 words.Remember to write your composition on the Answer Sheer 1 clearly and neatly.

因特网在生活中普及

因特网给人们生活带来的影响(好的方面,坏的方面)

我的观点和看法

Surfing on the Internet

Surfing on the Internet is a very popular pastime nowadays.Statistics show that the number of people who apply to have access to Internet doubles every month.When people meet,one common greeting is “Have you surfed on the Internet today?”

Internet opens us a new world and brings us close.Firstly,we can communicate with our friends more rapidly and quickly.Secondly,Internet brings us fun.

For example,many websites open chat-rooms where we can talk with different people and make new friends.Finally,many businessmen are talking so-called E-business seriously on the net.However,just as a coin has two sides,the Internet has its disadvantages.Firstly,some people may linger too long on the net while neglecting their work or study.Secondly,some columns on the net may have a negative influence on the youth.

In my opinion,Internet becomes an integral part of our lives,but it is certainly not everything.Living in the 21stcentury,we need to make good use of the new tool-Internet,but it is just a tool,not life itself.Neither depending on it too much nor ignoring it deliberately is not the correct way of treating the Internet.

②英文提纲作文

Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Making Friends according to the following outline.Your composition should be no less than 120 words.Remember to write your composition on the Answer Sheer 1 clearly and neatly.

The need for friends.

True friendship.

My principle in making friends.

Making Friends

As a human being,one can hardly do without a friend.We need friends to share our joy and sorrow,we consult with friends if there are problems we cannot handle alone;we go to friends for help when we are in troubles;and we sometimes confide to our friends what secrets we are relucatant to reveal to our family.In a sense,friends are often more important to us than relatives.

But not all who are friendly to each other and enjoy each other’s company in the social gatherings can be called true friends.True friendship consists in sincerity,mutual trust,and self-sacrifice,both in times of happiness and at moments of crisis.A true friend does not just tell us what we want to hear but will do what he thinks is the best for us in the long run.

When I choose friends,I do not care what work they do or what social background they are from,but I do notice those little things which reveal one’s characters.I would make sure that we really care for each for each other,so that no matter how much time goes by without seeing each other,I know my friends will always be there,ready to help if I need them.And I know we are true friends indeed.

(2)写作策略

1.考生必须审好题标,仔细推敲提纲思路,确定提纲所隐含的文章主题,不要遗漏甚至违背规范的文章要求。

2.充分利用提纲写好每段的主题句,主题句应紧扣主题、言简意赅。

3.根据标题、提纲和主题句选择与其关系最密切、最具说明力且最容易表达的细节、例子等,围绕主题句进行扩展。

(3)写作示范

例1:

Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Surfing on the Internet according to the following outline(given in Chinese).Your composition should be no less than 120 words.Remember to write your composition on the Answer Sheer 1 clearly and neatly.

广告的坏处。

广告的好处。

你的看法。

根据所给标题和中文提纲,可以确定作文主题是:对待广告应采取正确态度:有利有弊,但利大于弊,宜采用论文说文体。作文的前两段分别阐述对待“广告”的正反两方的观点,第三段在前文的基础上论述自己的结论,点名主题并总结全文。至于个人看法的取向,可选择前两段所提供的两个观点中任何一个,也可采取折中的方法,不用逼迫自己做出两难的抉择,本范文即为此类。

经以上分析,可将本篇作文的主题句和略加“细化”的提纲式拟为:

The harmfulness of advertising are obvious.

(1)extremely costly & paid by the consumers

(2)human resource-consuming

(3)promotes image over substance &a standardization of taste

2.There are also a number of persuasive arguments advanced in defense of advertising,

(1)informative

(2)stimulates demand for successful products&creates jobs

3.I prefer a society with advertising.

范文:

Advertising

The harmful effects of advertising are obvious.It is quite easy to find reason for attacking advertising.Firstly,it tends to be extremely costly and this cost must eventually be paid by the consumers.Secondly ,it uses up valuable human resources.The advertising profession occupies many of the best brain in any country.In addition,from the social standpoint,advertising promotes image over substance and a standardization of taste.

However,there are also a number of persuasive arguments advanced in defense of advertising.In the first place,it had a valuable informative function,helping potential customers know about the characteristics,and prices of products or where they can buy a particular product cheaply.Then,by stimulating demand for successful products,advertising creates jobs in the manufacturing and service sectors.

If I most choose between living in a society with typical advertising or without advertising,personally I prefer the former because advertising on the whole is good in spite of its deficiencies and problems.In my opinion,there is no need for us to give up eating for fear of choking.

例2:

Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Cheating in Examinations according to the following outline(given in Chinese).Your composition should be no less than 120 words.Remember to write your composition on the Answer Sheer 1 clearly and neatly.

1.Cheating in examinations is becoming a serious problem on many colleges and universities.

2.Many discussions have been held to analyze the causes of the problem,

3.Cheating in examinations has very bad effects.

根据所标题和英文提纲,可以确定作文主题是:考试作弊十分有害,应加以制止,宜采用议论文体。第一段为引言断,指出“舞弊”这一现象的存在;第二段为发展段,解释“舞弊”问题存在的原因;第三段为结尾段,阐述其危害性并呼吁解决。

经以上分析,可将主题句和“细化”的提纲拟为:

1.Phenomenon.

2.Many discussions have been held to analyze the causes of the problem

(1)Students are affected by the idea that money is everything and knowledge is useless.

(2)rigid grading system

3.It has some bad effects on students’academic performance as well as their morality practice.

(1)impossible to reveal their weaknesses

(2)immoral&should be punished

范文:

Cheating in Examinations

Nowadays, cheating in examinations is becoming a serious problem on many colleges and universities.Some students do not studay 13ard at their usual time.But during the examination,they always resort to cheating in order to get a passing grade.

Many discussions have been held to analyze the causes of the problem.Some students are affected by the idea that money is everything and knowledge is of no use,which is prevailing in society.What they care,instead of study hard,is earning money and pursuing comforts.So when the exam comes,they have to resort to cheating to earn a mere grade.Rigid grading system also promotes cheating.To some extent,colleges or universities themselves must bear the blame for their placing more emphasis on grades than on learning.Class attendance and performance are not important so long you pass the final exam.

It has some bad effects on students’academic performance as well as their morality practice.For example,cheating makes it impossible reveal their weaknesses and thus difficult for a teacher to know how to help these students.Besides,those who cheat in exams are not only cheating others but also,in fact,cheating themselves.This deceitful behavior is definitely immoral and should be serverely punished.

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